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.The Suitable Girl by Michelle McGrane
Pindrop Press
The suitable girl wears many faces. She is mythic, and she is contemporary. She mourns. She is sensual. She walks on water.
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I felt like a kid at Christmas when my copy of The Suitable Girl arrived in the mail. I know Michelle McGrane is an excellent poet, because I’m a big fan of her work. But this book even surpassed my expectations.
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Edited by Jo Hemmant of Pindrop Press, the poems in The Suitable Girl are beautiful and powerful. The often startling images are sharp and unique.
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This collection of poems offers so much variety! Whether you are interested in shorter pieces or prose poems, mythic voices or modern day scenes, you will find it all in The Suitable Girl.
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As a poet, I cannot help but marvel at Michelle McGrane’s technique. Her stanzas are well measured but don’t feel forced. Her poems are musical, and she echoes sound throughout entire pieces. The narrator’s voice is different in every poem, from a straight-talking beat style to elegant prose that rolls across the page.
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But I’ll try not to bore you with my urge to give a nerdy, technical analysis.
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Listen to her stories.
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You will meet Madame Bovary in this book, as well as Black Oak’s Daughter. There is also the story of Glauce’s bridal robe, poisoned by Medea. The Bee Man tells a story in eleven succinct lines. The Suitable Girl even sends postcards from the moon.
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The voices in this collection are strong. The dialect in ‘Terra Marique Potens’ is fantastic. The narrator is a force to be reckoned with, powerful on land and sea. She gives birth aboard ship and then fires a muzzle at a “flinty crag of a man bawling like the divil hisself.”
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All of the poems in The Suitable Girl are excellent. Some of the stories are heartbreaking. In Skin Offerings, the narrator describes a young woman’s anorexia and self-mutilation. 4:00 am tells the powerful story of a young mother who is battling for life. She leaves her mud hut to walk twelve kilometres to a government clinic for treatment. She hums a hymn and wears a gaily-patterned headscarf, an astounding symbol of her unbreakable spirit.
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Other poems are humorous. The Escape Artist, a “Lord of the Fleas” runs off “with the ringmaster’s silver weimaraner.” One of my favorite shorter pieces is The Recalcitrant Muse, who fires up a cigarette and could use a drink and a few hours’ sleep. This muse is late for an appointment with a middle-aged divorcée. She is also a muse who realizes that “immortality doesn’t pay the bills.”
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Did I say beautiful? Well, take a look for yourself at the sample poem below. The Suitable Girl has many faces. Sometimes she whispers her stories. Sometimes she speaks with her tongue in her cheek. Sometimes she screams. Each one of her voices should be read again and again.
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She Walks On Water
by Michelle McGrane
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The air is heavy with salt spray and kelp.
The seagull’s tongue is dumb.
Dark hair hides the face
of the madonna on the beach.
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Hands like silver starfish
lift a long skirt, reveal pale knees;
a cerulean scarf flutters in the breeze.
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She turns away from
the promenade’s ice-cream smiles
and waving kites,
shrugs off the dirty-weekend hotel
moored in the harbour’s embrace.
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Her spirit becomes a sail.
Her eyes are the horizon.
Her bare, white limbs shine
with phosphorescence.
The stars lean over to plant kisses
on her forehead.
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In the morning haze,
wisps of fog drifting in with the waves,
she walks on water.
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A blue strand washes up on the sand
among splintered timbers, plastic wrappings,
sodden cigarette butts.
Perched on a guano-stained mast,
the seagull keeps her secret.
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The above poem and quotes are © Michelle McGrane 2010 and used with permission. Please contact Pindrop Press or the author for permission before reposting.
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From Pindrop Press:
Michelle McGrane was born in Zimbabwe in 1974, spent her childhood in Malawi, and moved to South Africa with her family when she was fourteen. Her poetry has appeared in numerous journals and anthologies. She is the author of Fireflies & Blazing Stars (2002) and Hybrid (2003). She lives in Johannesburg and blogs at Peony Moon.
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To order The Suitable Girl, click HERE.
It is well worth the low price.
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Hi Julie,
Thank you for the poem excerpt and the recommendation. Your excitement shows, and the volume sounds rich and inviting. I love the cover art for the book, and my voice enjoyed reading the poem aloud.
Hi, Annie. Thank you very much for checking it out. Yes, the cover is awesome, as is the poem. I’m glad you read it out loud. This is definitely a book of poetry that is right up your alley. I know you will love it!
hey, julie gal. when u first told me about this book it sounded good. yr review makes it irresistible. i cant wait to read the poem abt the woman with the muzzle. thats my kind of pirate story.
i meant to say i love the poem. it is musical & feels like a combination of a myth and a real woman.
Hi, Dan. I swear, when I was typing the description of ‘Terra Marique Potens’, I KNEW you would love it! I love it, too. The voice is powerful, and the story makes pieces of my DNA applaud
It makes all of the poet in me applaud, too.
Thanks so much for checking it out and for the comment about the poem. Yes, it is beautiful. I know you will love this book.
Oh Julie thank you so much for writing such a beautiful review. Michelle will be thrilled, I know I am! I am so happy that you were touched by the spirit of this wonderful book. And it’s funny you should have put up She Walks on Water as it was that poem that lead me to Michelle — Rethabile had posted it on his site and I wanted to buy her book
Much love,
J
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Hi, Jo. Thank you so much for letting me post it. It is so excellent, and I know people who drop by here will agree. “She Walks On Water” is one of the first poems of Michelle’s that I ever read, and I think I read it via you! I was blown away. It’s one of those poems that I wish I had written, which to me, is the biggest compliment a poet could ever get or give. Much love to you, Jo! I’m so proud of you and Michelle. Fantastic and beautiful work!
Awesome review. I love reading what poets say about other poets, especially when it is so supportive. We have to cheer eachother on, certainly!!
Thanks for the recommendation. The book looks lovely…
Hi, Hannah. It’s so good to see you. I hope your weekend is awesome. Yes, it is good to cheer each other on. Michelle makes it easy for me to cheer, though, because I am truly a huge fan of her work. I think you will love it, too. Thanks so much for the good words and for checking it out!
Dear Julie, I’m so glad that you’ve enjoyed the collection.
Thank you for your generous words. x
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It was my pleasure, Michelle. Thank you for letting me post it. It is such a powerful collection! I am thrilled to be able to tell people about it. x -J
A beautiful review, Julie, I’m going to check it out. I especially liked the lines,
“Her spirit becomes a sail.
Her eyes are the horizon.
Her bare, white limbs shine
with phosphorescence.”
I’m landlocked at present, but on Michelle’s words, sail. Thank you for sharing this!!
PS: Happy end of February to you, may you be weathering winter well!
There’s some powerful imagery in “She Walks on Water,” and I can’t help but visualize the debris along the shoreline. “Skin Offerings” sounds like something I’d be able to identify with too.
Hi, Terresa. Happy end of February to you! Thank you for the kind words and for checking out The Suitable Girl. I love the passage you have quoted! I also thought of you when I chose that particular poem to share. I keep saying this over and over, but I know you will love it! It’s so much fun to share awesome poetry with people who will appreciate it. There are also some more samples of Michelle’s work at the link for her site on this post.
Thank you again, Terresa. Have a great weekend!
Hello, JR. Thank you for reading and for those good words. I actually started to post “Skin Offerings,” because it is such an excellent poem. Then I didn’t want to be too piggish in what I put up here. It’s tempting to post every single one of the poems. But now I wish I had put “Skin Offerings” up to show a contrast of voices. And the poem is so powerful. You would really connect with the voice and style of the poem, too. Thanks so much for checking it out, JR!
What a treat! If the review is this good, the poems must be wonderful! I have seen Michelle’s comments here but have never gone to her place — my loss, I now know. Thanks for the introduction, Jules.
Hello, Karen. Thank you so much! Yes, the poems are amazing. Seriously. I know you will love her style. You would really enjoy Michelle’s blog, too. Peony Moon. (See the link above). She spends most of her time highlighting other poets at Peony Moon, and I’ve found a lot of good reads there. I have a list so long that I don’t know if I’ll live long enough to buy it all, but I’m sure going to try. Have a great weekend, Karen!
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Beautiful and generous review, Julie.
Yes, “Her spirit becomes a sail.”
I really like the landscape and bodyscape she evokes.
Hello, Ruth. It’s always a pleasure to see you. I love the “landscape and bodyscape.” Yes, the woman in the poem becomes the landscape in a sense, doesn’t she? I love that she walks on water! That’s another line I wish I had written, and again, I mean that as the highest compliment.
Thank you, Ruth, for your lovely words.
Thanks for this intro, Julie. I am off to visit her blog.
Hi, Lorenzo. Thanks so much for checking it out!
A beautiful review, Julie. Thanks for sharing with us!
Hello and welcome. Short poems is an intriguing name. Thanks for reading!