Sometimes, a book of poems comes along that is beautifully written, but it also portrays life in a way that is very personal to me.
The Bones of Saints Under Glass by Jeff Fleming is one of those books.
The poems in this chapbook deal with death, love, and family relationships. There is sorrow sprinkled with bits of joy. There is the death of a mother. There is the beauty of young sons. It is real. It is the story of life.
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Jeff Fleming paints a vivid landscape with an economy of words. Each word is carefully placed within the landscape. In the title poem, the narrator is hiking.
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“There is no trail before me
but a rough, jagged path
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flows out behind,
slowly disappearing
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as the plants I’ve crushed
stand upright again.”
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Near a cluster of yellow flowers, the narrator sees the skeleton of a small bird, bleached white. Like all of the poems in this book, it is a moment in the palm of a hand. But it is so much more than that. The moment echoes with questions and observations about life.
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Ratchet is a poem that tells the story of an “ordinary” day. Even an ordinary day paints the larger picture of a family.
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“Most days, my mother
sat in the living room
knitting. Her sneezes
sounded like questions.”
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The poem then pivots to the father. With a wonderfully light touch, Fleming shows us the divide between father and son. The father takes the son out to the garage on weekends and patiently explains “the intricacies of everyday/machinery…”
The narrator ends with a gentle understanding. “It was the only poetry he had.”
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Each poem in this book breathes. The subjects are universal. No matter who we are or where we are born, we all have to deal with relationships and the loss of loved ones. Jeff Fleming does it in a way that is not overly dramatic. It touches me in a way that I can apply to my own life.
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Of course, not all of the poems deal with death specifically, and all of the poems make me think. But as we pass that “invincible” age, many of us begin to think about death in a different way. I am fortunate that my mother is alive. I have acted very immature during the death of other loved ones. When the time comes for me to say goodbye to my mother, I hope I can remember the wisdom in these poems.
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Swimming in Beauty and Light shows the physical death of the mother and how the narrator deals with the pain.
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“I am alone, crumpled
in a chair at the foot of your metal
bed, a cage trapping you in this life
a little longer…”
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There is deep pain. There is beauty in the physical act of dying. And there is also acceptance. The narrator thinks of how others will deal with his own death.
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“They will see me pass
and sadness
will overflow their hearts
and consume them for a time,
but when they break the surface
of pain and breathe the world
anew, the sky will seem washed clean,
Cradled by life,
they will own their days again.”
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In the end of the poem, the narrator imagines himself in that “otherwhere” with his father and mother. They will be “swimming in beauty and light.”
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Even with resolution, the questions and pain do not end after a physical death. Orphan Poem One punched me in the gut for many reasons. The narrator’s cell phone rings. It is the narrator’s mother. The mother begins to talk. She even acknowledges a couple of the narrator’s questions. But the narrator cannot understand what she is saying. She is dead.
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The last poem in the collection, Empty Farmhouse, leaves me breathless. An old house was abandoned when the crops failed. An apple tree has been blown over by a storm, and it leans on the house. Yet it continues to grow apples and drop them into the house through an open window
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“leaving seeds that struggle
to grow among
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abandoned furniture.”
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Like the seeds that struggle to grow, we are left on this earth when our loved ones are gone. But there is beauty, even in death. There is joy as the next generation takes its place. And there is the comforting thought that someday, we will swim together in that beauty and light.
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I’d better stop myself now, or I’ll examine every poem in the book. Whether you’re a dorky language nerd like me or someone who just enjoys a good read, I highly recommend The Bones of Saints Under Glass.
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I should also mention the great cover art, which was done by Hosho McCreesh. Hosho is another poet on the top of my list.
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You can order the The Bones of Saints Under Glass HERE.
Note the low price!!! I am a HUGE fan of Propaganda Press. The work is high quality, and the prices are affordable, which puts poetry where it belongs. In the hands of people.
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Jeff Fleming is also the editor of nibble, which is an awesome poetry magazine. Be sure to check it out. A new issue is in the works.
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And as always…
None of us poets are jack squat without you, the reader.
In other words, I appreciate you very much. Thanks for reading!
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You have achieved a first, for me. You have quoted just the right passages, evoked just the right images and said all the right things to convince me, a poor poet myself, to purchase a book of poetry without having touched it myself.
Ordering it now.
Alright! Thanks so much, Keith. It truly is a beautiful book.
Check out nibble, too. You might want to consider submitting. I wanted to submit, but now I think I’ll wait. I don’t want to seem like I’m sucking up just to submit. I truly mean everything I said.
(P.S. – Sorry I haven’t visited this week. I haven’t been around much but will do so this evening. I look forward to reading more of your work).
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Wow.
Julie.
Seriously.
Amazing review and look at the wondrous good it already did! Keith bought the book because of your review.
Thank you, thank you, thank you!
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You’re certainly welcome, Jeff. It is an awesome book. I regret taking so long to post about it. With the move and scrabbling for a job, it seems like something always interrupts me these past few months (wah…wah…that’s the sound of Julie whining). Ha! Ha!
For some reason, I can burp my own stuff up here in ten minutes between telephone calls or doorbells ringing. With somebody else’s words, I worry a lot more about doing it justice. Not that I don’t care about my own, but I want to make sure I’m getting it right when I post someone else’s perspective.
Anyway, I hope everyone checks it out. Seriously, the price is way low for such excellent work. Congratulations, Jeff. I put you on the top shelf:) It is beautiful. -Julie
“As the plants I’ve crushed stand upright again”.
I feel like that is happening in my life now. I moved back in with my hubby after one year living separately and both in therapy. This is a lovely book. No wonder it seized your heart and rocked it back and forth.
Hi, Technobabe. I hope everything works out for you and hubby. Those relationships can be rough at times. That’s a great way to put it, though. This book seized my heart and rocked it back and forth. Thanks so much for reading.
Thanks for the recommendation and review, Jules!
The book sounds wonderful, and I truly appreciate your taking the time to provide these lines to contemporary poets for us. I have come to know some talented folks here through you, and I think it is a function of your own generosity of spirit that you link us with them. You, yourself, are a pretty amazing gal!
“Aw, shucks,” Julie says, stirring the dirt with her toe. HA! HA! HEY, KAREN! You’re pretty amazing yourself, woman. But I’m just fooling around, because I do love the compliments. Thank you!
And thanks for taking the time to click the links and read. I really appreciate that. Yes, there are some very talented folks out there. I was blessed to meet leah. She’s another one I should post about. I love a book of hers that I ordered. When I get an extra few bucks, I’m going to order Ed Galing’s. There are so many others.
I think you’ll love Jeff’s voice. It’s beautiful without being sappy, you know? It really hit home with me, too, now that my father is frail. I’m not writing him off yet. But it’s something I think about more than I used to. Okay, enough of my blabbering now. Ha! Ha! Thanks so much, Karen:)
I will buy it as soon as I get my scholarship and put back the money I had to spend on school books…and I’ll also add it to my birthday wish list (whom knows I might get the book even before…).
good luck with that job search. It will get better soon (I hope)…
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Hi, Annamari! It’s so good to see you. That is awesome! The scholarship sounds great. I also do what you do with the wish list. Thank you very much. I hope your days have been good ones. -Julie
What an amazing review of what seems like a totally awesome book. I agree with the others. It is quite a service you do here–introducing us to wonderful poets…in addition to yourself. I would never have access to such a review in my usual world.
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Hi, Brigindo!! My comments are out of order, as usual:) Yours is below. -J
Lovely work here!
(as I wander over to read nibble right now).
I’m really interested in the strange cover art, as well.
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Hello! The Storialist. That’s so cool. Yes, that cover is beautiful, isn’t it? That is done by Hosho McCreesh, who is another excellent poet. I’ve been meaning to put up a post of a book by him and Christopher Cunningham. As usual, I’m a day late and a dollar short…ha! What is wrong with me? I can hardly make it out of the house every day without falling down.
But I ramble, as usual. Thank you very much for checking it out. It’s well worth the effort:) -Julie
thanks for sharing these beautiful poems with us – you are a champion to the art —bkm
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Thanks, Barbara! If you have written another poem like the one from last week, I will turn real cartwheels:) I love to see people break open with guts and soul. That was just beautiful.
And thank you for reading. I love having the freedom to post good books. I’m certainly not an “authority,” whatever that means. But I know good poetry when I see it. This book blew me away. -J
Thank you, Brigindo! So good to see you. I feel like I keep apologizing to everyone for not visiting last week. I’ll make it soon, though. Life…shew! Ha! Ha! I’m whimpering again.
Thank you for the kind words. Sometimes, it’s easy for a poet or writer to get stuck in our own little world. So I am very happy to meet people from all careers. You also bring a unique perspective to my world. I like that!
Yes, it is an awesome book. Thanks so much for checking it out:)
It is always interesting to me, to read others perspective on death and dying in the family, including the reviewers. Not that I am obsessed with the subject (I’ve come to my own terms with it).
This sterling report makes me want to read another poet’s take on it. Not an easy thing to do to turn a skeptics eye there Julie but you seem to have done it.
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Thanks so much, TWM. One thing I really like about Bones of Saints is that it’s not overdone or overly dramatic. It’s beautifully written but so real. One day, you’re hanging with your significant other, going to work, playing with kids, or any of the million other things people do in life. A loved one gets sick and dies. The world keeps spinning. It’s painful. We have to keep going.
I admit that I am still very immature when it comes to death. Among other things, I go into deep denial (to the point of craziness). I have never handled it “well,” if there is such a thing. I don’t know how I’m going to handle the next one…or even my own. This book gave me a really good perspective. I hope I’ll have the sense enough to use it, instead of acting like I always do.
Also, as a poet, I really appreciate Jeff’s technique. In two lines, he says so much more than I’ve just said in two paragraphs
Thanks again, TWM. I really appreciate how you take the time to read. -Julie
I agree with Julie, I own a copy and it’s a superb collection, beautifully presented and written with am at times fierce honesty.
I recomend ‘Bones…’ too!
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Hi, ashleycapes. Thank you very much. It’s always great to hear from people who have already purchased. nibble is also on my list. I can’t wait to see what’s new. Thanks again! -Julie
Julie, my darling, that review was so much more than I’d even thought possible. What astounding words you bring to the table, my dear. Thanks for making my day, and bringing in a couple of new orders for Jeff’s book! You are the rock star I wish I could be.
I would definitely say don’t wait to submit to nibble. Jeff will not think you are being a kiss-up. Your poems kick ass; if he chooses them, it’s because they kick ass.
Good luck with the job search and all that stupid stuff that we have to do in our daily lives just to get by in between the moments when we get to pen beautiful words. Good things will come to you soon.
Together for the revolution,
leah
Propaganda Press
alt-current.com
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Hi, leah. Thanks so much for the good words. I agree with you…the job stuff will straighten out eventually. In a weird way, scrabbling for money, worrying and sweating have always been good for my poetry and fiction. That seems to be the only area where I’m really producing good results lately. But that’s a positive thing.
I dashed off for an interview this morning, then talked to someone about a possible temp gig., did some other running around, etc. I came home covered in sweat and wrote a poem. I mean, it was swirling around in my head all day. I think the sweat kicked it in:) Then I started a short story. There’s just something about “hard times” that turns up the volume on my creative juices. Not that I’d want to be in this situation forever…ha!
And you are very welcome! It’s the least I can do. I really appreciate your press. I can’t even count the number of times I have seen books I want to order, but when I look at their prices, I can’t afford it. Your low prices make excellent poetry available to anyone. That is SO cool!
I do hate that I took so long to give Jeff a shout out, but now I’m happy that a new audience is reading his words. Thanks so much, leah! -Julie
Julie, you’ve written a generous, thoughtful tribute. I love the title, The Bones of Saints Under Glass.
All the best with your chapbook, Jeff.
Hi, Michelle! Isn’t that title great? For me, the title is part of the whole piece, and I love a good one like Jeff’s. Thanks so much for reading:)
Nice review Julie!
BONES FOR SAINTS UNDER GLASS is one of my favorite books of probably the last year, maybe more…I can’t recommend it enough. & you can’t beat the price–Propaganda Press makes inexpensive chapbooks, each a great way to sample new work from their stable.
Hey, Hosh! Great to see you. I was just telling folks how I love your work and want to get you up here when my world stops spinning. I’m the world’s crappiest blogger, but please don’t tell anybody my secret. Ha! Ha!
You’re so right. Bones of Saints is one of the best books I’ve read this year. I put it on the top shelf of my creaky old bookcase. The top shelf gets read over and over:)
Thanks so much!
Hi Julie,
Thank you for the recommendation and a generous, compelling review.
Hi, Annie! It’s great to see you. I hope the second half of your vacation was as good as the first. Thanks so much for reading:)
great review and a damn fine book. jeff, when he’s not strung out on everlasting gobstoppers, xanax and cheap scotch, is a great goddamn poet.
don’t let him near your goldfish, though; it gets ugly, I hear…
Hi, Christopher! I just looked up Xanax on drugs.com, because I was going to try to make a joke about the side effects. (You know how the side effects are always worse than what’s wrong? The anxiety’s gone, but I can’t pee and just hacked up part of my lung…or whatever ).
But even more interesting is that I can follow drugs.com on Twitter. That cracked me up. Let’s see now…I wonder what Xanax is up to today? Hmmm… Forget everybody else! I’m following Xanax from now on!
I could USE some Xanax. Dang, I’m a mile a minute. Ha! Ha!
Okay, enough of my stupidity. Great to see you! Yes, you are so, so right about the book. It is excellent, and I’m not kidding when I say it’s on my top shelf. I’ve been reading it over and over, so I can maybe learn something. Awesome work.
Thanks so much, Christopher:)
I agree – such beautiful language.
Hello, Diane. Thanks so much for checking it out!
What a wonderful review! I love how you entwine his lines throughout. A wonderful title too. I agree, poetry shouldn’t be such a highbrow activity. Power to the people!
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Hi, Christine. It’s always so good to see you. Thank you very much. Oh, yeah! I love it when good poetry gets into the hands of the people:) Have a beautiful week. -J
Some lovely poetry here — right up my street. Thanks for the heads-up, Julie!
Hello, Jo. The stanza where the mother’s sneezes sounded like questions reminded me of you. I’m not sure why. Maybe it’s the style. But I thought of you when I read it. It’s awesome, isn’t it?
Thanks so much. It’s great to see you:)
Julie, you’ve woven a spell.
Even your review of somebody else’s poetry is poetic in itself.
These poems, these lines, you’ve highlighted — they’re right up my alley, too. (You know me, my thing for mortality themes, memento mori).
“bed, a cage trapping you in this life / a little longer…”
– Now, that just breaks me. (Excuse me while I sweep my wailing fragments off the floor.) Sniff.
Hi, S.L.! Yes, I knew you would love it! The style does remind me a lot of your work. You also have that beautiful light touch that packs a powerful punch. Thank you so much for reading and for your thoughtful comments. Have a beautiful week:)
nice to read something very different…so on your blog you not only post your work you also appreciate others…and i appreciate you for that…
you know what touched me the most in this entire post?its just a line..i dont know why i like it to the core
“Her sneezes sounded like questions” its so much filled with poetry…(poetry filled with poetry?what is that ?
..i dont know..rather i dont want to know…)
god bless the poet…and you too
Narendra, I can’t believe I missed your comment and I apologize for being late to say hello. I hope you’re doing well. Thanks so much for reading.
oh no problem
even I was too busy with life and stuff..i almost havent visited you entire month…(perhaps because i was in an impression that you were away…cos i dint get the reply thing in my dashboard>>my comments
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i should have visited ur blog to see if you have updated or not..:)
now at it…
No problem at all. I always try to say hello and feel badly when I discover I haven’t. I shouldn’t worry, though. I know you know I’m thinking good thoughts about you. Have a beautiful day and thanks again for reading!